Alchemy Book Cover (Part 2): you can provide feedback if you wish.

I am working on an alchemy book and did a second draft for the cover. Have a look and say what you think.

Before moving on, I would like to express my gratitude to the following individuals for their helpful responses to my first post; the one seeking feedback. You are all appreciated!

- u/bzuley,

- u/Abraxis2praxis,

- u/Geo_Joy,

- u/SolSoma333,

- u/Yuri_Gor,

- As well as anyone else who commented useful tips.

Book Title: Your Personal Philosopher's Stone.