law sample essays

hello! i have 3 resits to do for Y1 Law. 2 are borderline fails, one is a pretty bad fail but I do know where I went wrong so I’m certain I’ll do better. does anyone mind sharing samples of essays that they scored well in? contract, criminal, and tort law to be exact. also, do other law students have experience with resits and do you have any advice on how to write a better essay? my uni was pretty unhelpful and I can’t see any sample essays, my feedback was full of one liner statements that were so unhelpful and I cannot seem to find past year papers online. any help is appreciated, thanks! 🤍