First fake skin tryout

I’m sort of proud with this, but I know I have some work to do. I also lost my stencil part way through so for as lost as I was, I feel I recovered decently. Honest opinions and/or advice?

I’m sort of proud with this, but I know I have some work to do. I also lost my stencil part way through so for as lost as I was, I feel I recovered decently. Honest opinions and/or advice?